You have purchased some goods from a company and the goods were supposed to be delivered within three days of purchase. Seven days have already gone and you have not received the products yet.
Write a letter to a company manager with whom you arranged the delivery of goods. In your letter:
• inform him/her what items you have purchased
• ask the reason for the delay in delivery
• suggest what can be done about the matter
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain the delay of the delivery. The order number is Nop338336.
A week ago, I visited your company to buy some home appliances and I ordered TV and refrigerator. Both products are all brand new series that was the reason why I could not buy directly at that time. So, you need to bring the products from your warehouse and I got your assurance that I would get in four business days to delivery. However, until now I checked on your web site and I got my message which the products are still waiting for ready. I don’t understand why this issue has occur and I need your explanation.
I suggest that if you will not shipment these, I would like to cancel my order.
Thank you for giving the matter you attention and I hope to hear from your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Don Lee
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to complain the...
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Line 4, column 369, Rule ID: WEB_SITE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'website'?
Suggestion: website
...y. However, until now I checked on your web site and I got my message which the products...
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Line 4, column 490, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'occurred'.
Suggestion: occurred
...on't understand why this issue has occur and I need your explanation. I sugg...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r from your reply. Yours faithfully, Don Lee
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 692.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46451612903 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46596815864 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658064516129 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2891354946 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134616186664 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047717198661 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523975344943 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854779360202 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465221759925 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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