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some people think living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The twenty-first century saw the extraordinary expansion of big cities. With an increasing number of people choosing to live in big cities, people begin to concern whether living in large cities is good to their health. In my opinion, living in the cities could do harm to our well-being.
It is undeniable that there is more pollution in cities than rural place. Taking sound pollution as an example. Due to the massive use of advanced transportation, such as cars, trains, airplane etc. people live in big cities suffering more noise then any other time. It is a very common experience for those...
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there is more pollution in cities than rural place.
there is more pollution in cities than that in rural place.
suffering more noise then any other time.
suffering more noise than any other time.
Sentence: In my opinion, living in the cities could do harm to our well-being.
Description: The word harm is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to harm
Sentence: Long explosion under these kind of sound pollution can damaging our hearing ability as well as our psychological stability.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present participle or gerund
Suggestion: Refer to can and damaging
Hence, they seldom talking to their families
Hence, they seldom talk to their families
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Avg. Sentence Length: 16.444 21.0
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.59 4.7
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Sentence Length SD: 6.112 7.5
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