Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity,improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people feel that unpaid community services, like, working for a charity,improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children, should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. Let us first analyze both sides of the argument before drawing a reasoned conclusion.
There are several points to be made against the view that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes.To begin with,not everyone thinks in the same way. There can be some problems, like, stressing too much, for tutors and workers who have to work without any wage or salary. ...
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