Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement. Give the reason and relevant examples.

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...one of the crucial role in every nation.A section of society claim that violent ...
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....A section of society claim that violent sports should be banned whereas others ...
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...ociety claim that violent sports should be banned whereas others not agree with...
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...rts should be banned whereas others not agree with that. I disagree with thise...
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... others not agree with that. I disagree with thise statement because every spor...
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...s not agree with that. I disagree with thise statement because every sports has...
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...because every sports has involved little dangerous and choosing the sports reflec...
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...he freedom of player. To begin with, choosing the career in sports which comp...
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...letely depends on player choice.firstly, There is no need to ban any dangerous ...
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...depends on player choice.firstly, There is no need to ban any dangerous sports,...
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...layer choice.firstly, There is no need to ban any dangerous sports,beacuse the ...
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... is no need to ban any dangerous sports,beacuse the players chosed games according to ...
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... to ban any dangerous sports,beacuse the players chosed games according to their ...
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...will even it is dangerous. For instance, surfers know their game is involved hig...
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.... For instance, surfers know their game is involved highly risk even a single m...
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...their game is involved highly risk even a single mistake happen. The passion a...
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...olved highly risk even a single mistake happen. The passion about surfing Lead...
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...n a single mistake happen. The passion about surfing Leads them to play that....
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...ngle mistake happen. The passion about surfing Leads them to play that. Banni...
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.... The passion about surfing Leads them to play that. Banning games will affec...
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... them to play that. Banning games will affect the freedom of the nationalities....
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... freedom of the nationalities. Secondly, I honestly believe that sports provide e...
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...mployment to the people.even the peoples are full time athletics or just fun ti...
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...nt to the people.even the peoples are full time athletics or just fun time players. Th...
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...o the people.even the peoples are full time athletics or just fun time players...
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...n the peoples are full time athletics or just fun time players. Thise can help...
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...or just fun time players. Thise can help the nation somehow reducing enemployme...
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...time players. Thise can help the nation somehow reducing enemployment problem. ...
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...e can help the nation somehow reducing enemployment problem. To exemplify, we ...
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...ing enemployment problem. To exemplify, we can see lot of surfers teach the su...
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...yment problem. To exemplify, we can see lot of surfers teach the surfing in bea...
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...plify, we can see lot of surfers teach the surfing in beach side. So many tour...
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...each the surfing in beach side. So many tourists interested to learn this crazy...
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...beach side. So many tourists interested to learn this crazy game even though it ...
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...appy to do their passion even if it has indulge risk. However, every sports has its...
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... However, every sports has its own risk level.When it comes to ban the dangerou...
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...r, every sports has its own risk level.When it comes to ban the dangerous sports i...
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...ts has its own risk level.When it comes to ban the dangerous sports its realt ha...
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... ban the dangerous sports its realt hard to devide risky and non risky sports. O...
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...s sports its realt hard to devide risky and non risky sports. One main reason to...
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...ky sports. One main reason to not to ban dangerous sports are
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...n reason to not to ban dangerous sports are
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...son to not to ban dangerous sports are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, honestly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06550218341 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55332705182 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624454148472 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.940853084 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2307692308 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181635627694 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616324188529 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708066048717 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143835838411 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758392783414 0.056905535591 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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