It is always contraversory topic weather government spending their money on road ways or railways. Even though both railways and road ways plays an effective transplantation methods , when coming to the economy ,railways will be the best way to spend funds by government. In this essay we will going to discuss the reasons why I'm completely agree with this topic.
To begin with, the main of transportation system to provide comfort and secure either it be railway or roadway. When it comes to railway it provide comfortable beds and some police power to monitor for crimes or any unlawful behavior. We can travel without feel pressure for long journeyes hassel free.for instance Even it is 24hr journey we can food on train and rest rooms, it will help us to commute easy.not only that if it night journey it has always some police power to monitor unlike bus, it doesn't contain comfy beds chair are not good to travel long.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 160.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8375 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55930770702 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.1932443853 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 46.0 5.01903807615 917% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125548825555 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692028454149 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321773552403 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985736041032 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364466309138 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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