Development of the countries economy, plays a great role in the citizens life, as well as different fields in the nation. Most of countries goal to enhance their level of comfort by advancement of economic status.Though infrequently Economic Improvement consequently tend to lose the culture values of society.thise Essay discus the how advantages of the improved slandered living outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... of the countries economy, plays a great role in the citizens life, as well as d...
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...ountries economy, plays a great role in the citizens life, as well as different ...
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Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...es economy, plays a great role in the citizens life, as well as different fields in th...
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Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the countries') or simply say ''Most countries''.
Suggestion: Most of the countries; Most countries
...well as different fields in the nation. Most of countries goal to enhance their level of comfort...
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... fields in the nation. Most of countries goal to enhance their level of comfort b...
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Suggestion: Though
...mfort by advancement of economic status.Though infrequently Economic Improvement conse...
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Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mfort by advancement of economic status.Though infrequently Economic Improvement conse...
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Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...uently Economic Improvement consequently tend to lose the culture values of socie...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ure values of society.thise Essay discus the how advantages of the improved sland...
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Line 1, column 335, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...e values of society.thise Essay discus the how advantages of the improved slandered li...
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Line 1, column 386, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...antages of the improved slandered living outweigh the disadvantages.
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...iving outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 13.1623246493 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 1.0 24.0651302605 4% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 41.998997996 26% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 358.0 1615.20841683 22% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 61.0 315.596192385 19% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86885245902 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.79468239267 4.20363070211 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4324596271 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 45.0 176.041082164 26% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.737704918033 0.561755894193 131% => OK
syllable_count: 110.7 506.74238477 22% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.5 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.0 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.06120827912 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214468510159 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13378120309 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106306303768 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214468510159 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 50.2224549098 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.36 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.34 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 78.4519038076 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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