Fast food companies tremendiously changed the people's eating habits unlike past traditional consuming methods of food because of that huge number of peoples believe it should be banned from advertising conversely, others concur that advertise is a right must posses all companies. I strongly the later argument because, food consuming is alwalys depends on people's choice.
To begin with, firstly, adertise the fast food will lead the tendency to consume thise food in some peoples and others may not but it completely dependent on individual choices. First individual should aware the consequence of fast food eating if not there would be no use even through restrictions on advertising fast food companies. For instance, we can notice a lot of individuals buying panipuri, fridrice and noodles, still they are not adversting to people's.thus, there is no use if we restrict the advertises from fast food companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, firstly, if, may, so, still, thus, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 145.0 315.596192385 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44827586207 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9066327037 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 176.041082164 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2266823798 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.0 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.2 7.06120827912 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30802387153 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162307684008 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110620022686 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256470837817 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702308468526 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.