Humans invented various machine to complete their house hold work fast and with little effort. Women are now able to maintain home as well as their duties even though they have childrens need care,by use modern home appliance.thise essay will discus the advantages while mother works along with my opinion weither the benefits outweigh the down effects.
To begin with, with the increasing of financial crisis women needs to work in order to support the family. Firstly, working womens are efficient to care children because of knowledge enchantment in working place will lead to guide the children.for instance, if the mother working it she can easily improve his knowledge thus she can directly influence the children with their wisdom. Moreover, unlike housewife working women are more more courage to solve their problems in home. Secondly, if the mother works it leads to financial support to their family. Most of times, especially in middle class families,working mother plays an important role while helping the father. To exemplify, my mother works along with my father in order provide us some poketmoney and pay little bills. Thus my father no need stretch his income for thise little payments.
However, every coin has both two sides. One of the main down side of working mothers is lack of sufficient time which can effect their house hold work. Eventhough modern home applience helped to have mother to more time women do not have sufficient time work out side. The mothers who are living with combined family they likely have less time no matter use modern equipments.
- New household appliances have resulted in more free time for women and have enabled them to both work and run a home with dependent children What are the advantages for a family when the mother works Do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages 68
- In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas and towards urban areas.Why do you think that is? What problems can cause this? 22
- In some developing countries, it is difficult to get good teachers to work in rural areas which can have a negative impact on the education of children in those rural communities. Why do you think good teachers do not want to work in rural area in develop 22
- Many countries aim to improve their standard of living through economic development. Sometimes this may bring loss of social values as a result. Do the advantages of higher standard of living outweigh its disadvantages? 22
- In some developing countries, it is difficult to get good teachers to work in rural areas which can have a negative impact on the education of children in those rural communities. Why do you think good teachers do not want to work in rural area in develop 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09195402299 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45184984281 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593869731801 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6816781168 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351482353962 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124501431486 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707814723264 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240698601848 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325384794966 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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