You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house.
Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was inside it. Make some suggestions about how to get it back.
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health and spirit. It was a good time which I had spent with you the last weekend at your house. It will always remain a memorable time in my life. I’m writing this letter to tell you that when I reached my home I find my coat was missing.
Today morning when I was getting late to catch a train, in the rush, I left my coat. The coat is of black leather which has two side pockets and one pen pocket on the upper left side. I think the coat is still hanging behind the door of your room. There are very crucial things in my coat left pocket that is my identity card, driving license and my office diary.
I’d request you to send my coat to my address. You can either hand over my coat to my friend who is coming to my home next Monday or you can pack that coat in the box and courier me to my residential address.
Looking forward to having a great time with you again.
Yours truly,
Harsimran Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I hope this letter finds you in the best...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: This morning
...my home I find my coat was missing. Today morning when I was getting late to catch a trai...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eat time with you again. Yours truly, Harsimran Singh
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, still, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15104166667 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.94554083053 2.54303337028 77% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588541666667 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6661509861 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4166666667 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345287769502 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134176220917 0.0766984524023 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799193287329 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217807179465 0.12726935374 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571250239838 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 70.7449484536 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.32 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.