As we all know that cuisine's play a fundamental role in human health life. Foods generate vitamins in the human body that leads to keep body function actively. Some people think that it is an individual's responsibility to take care of own health, conversely, some people argued that the government should look after their resident's health. However, I think that the individual’s and the government cooperatively need to look forward on this crucial situation.
On the one hand, the perform of an individual people have to take care of their health mandatory because to terminate from manifold hazardous diseases like heart attack cholesterol jaundice, diarrhoea and food poison. For instance, as regard’s with doctors, there must be a health check-up annually in order to keep body active and energetic and it guides you to keep mentally fit simultaneously. Therefore, for this people have to diminish eating meals at the outdoor foods places.
On the other hand, the action of the government also concedes considerable to protect and make citizens life vigorous. So, initially, whilst importing cuisine’s product from Overseas, there should be strict strict rules and regulation to abort the import of unhealthy food products. At this point, I’m not saying that there should be legally prohibited in every meal sectors. For example, the government must do the inspection in the expiry date of food items all over the food market locations.
To conclude, I strongly believe that there needs to be the responsibility and awareness program by an individual and the government in order to cease from miscellaneous unwholesome bacteria from foods so that human body can stay healthy for the long term period.
- It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than that of young people in many countries in the future?Do you think it is a positive or negative development? 61
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years in the world that many cities now are "one big traffic jam". Do you think that this statement is true? What measure can government take to address this problem? 84
- The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. 56
- The chart below shows the average hours worked per day by married men and women in paid employment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant . 73
- Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others, however, believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As we all know that cuisines play a fundam...
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Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...tively. Some people think that it is an individuals responsibility to take care of own heal...
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Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... crucial situation. On the one hand, the perform of an individual people have to take ca...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ally fit simultaneously. Therefore, for this people have to diminish eating meals at...
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: strict
... product from Overseas, there should be strict strict rules and regulation to abort the impor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31272727273 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97941366465 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589090909091 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5972614178 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224832769749 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773083431593 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917872050677 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132044535664 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652499482434 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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