Write a letter to the mayor, the head of a municipal government, complaining about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing a dangerous situation.
Dear Sir,
Greetings for the day!
My name is Amanpreet Kaur, resident of your town Patiala, Punjab, and through this letter, I want to bring your attention towards some teenagers, who creates a severe problem to put down their dogs freely in our local street.
Please allow me to shed some light on this matter. Firstly, the boys, who live in a rented house that is next to my house, have three dogs. Moreover, they leave them freely all the time. Secondly, the bread of dogs is Pitbull and Dobermann, which are very aggressive in nature. Besides this, these are not human-friendly. Last but not least, every day they dig so many holes in parks and also destroying the beauty of our parks.
Therefore, due to their fear the children of our society are not keen to play in playgrounds and walk along in parks after school. Meanwhile, the one old age man has been bitten by Pitbull dog. Still, these boys are not listening to our request to put their dogs in a cage and also abuse us.
Could you please take strict action against them?
If this is done, not only children, but also parents feel jubilant, and children become enjoy outdoor activities, which are essential for their physical growth.
Looking forward to your prompt action.
Yours Sincerely,
Amanpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Greetings for the day! My na...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77477477477 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3384062563 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684684684685 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7502028004 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7142857143 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0992593617885 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279739145289 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310208222983 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0368555012918 0.12726935374 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341634112476 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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