Write a letter to the Mayor, the head of a municipal government, complaining about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing danger. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing expressing my concern related to danger and damage that can occur in the New Safari zone community where I reside.
At the first place to begin, it has been noticed few youngsters living in the same community are not taking care of their pets. I have saw a couple of teenagers bring their dogs for a walk however they leave them unattended and get engaged in their gossip or stunts. This practice can lead to severe consequences as my mother-in-law had been a victim of these dogs. One of the dogs bit her severely, and she has to admit to hospital. In addition, we include extremely youthful off-springs age from 1 year to 5 living in the area and often enjoy to play in the community garden can be victim of these unattended pets. I please ask you to pursue this matter in consideration for preventing the safety of community.
I will look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Diana Moore
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'sawed', 'sawn', 'seen'.
Suggestion: sawed; sawn; seen
...e not taking care of their pets. I have saw a couple of teenagers bring their dogs ...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Diana Moore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69047619048 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75502015499 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690476190476 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.558733687 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5555555556 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101481857715 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366568950855 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398630620058 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0353304481722 0.12726935374 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250807247644 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.