It is commonly known that some parents in the US impose curfew on their teenagers where they are not permitted to be outdoors beyond a particular time at night, provided they have an adult along with them. In my opinion, such restrictions are extremely imperative in order for the child to be safe and disciplined.
To begin with, children should not be allowed to go out in the night as it is very unsafe. Many bad influences namely drug peddlers and alcoholics frequent the streets once it gets dark. Moreover, naive and young children are an easy bait and are most likely to get caught in their schemes and traps. Secondly, once out of the house, parents who strive to keep them unharmed, are unable to provide any protection. For example, a recent statement released by the police encouraged parents to impose curfews to particularly prevent their unsuspecting children from perverts and criminals. Therefore, keeping their well being in mind, setting a time deadline is absolutely necessary.
Furthermore, children should be disciplined from an early age. During their formation years the importance of following rules should be inculcated. Although some exceptions can be made where, if the child is out beyond the agreed time they have to be accompanied by an adult. For instance, if a family is hosting a party, they should personally ensure that all the children are picked and dropped home safely to mitigate the risk of any unpleasant situations. Consequently, other parents will follow suit thus, displaying the quality of responsibility. While the child may not immediately understand the need of a curfew but it will definitely benefit them in the long run.
In conclusion, I believe this method must not only be practiced in the US but by parents all over the world. All in all it is vital to develop good ethics and safeguard all teenagers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 660, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...ing in mind, setting a time deadline is absolutely necessary. Furthermore, children should be dis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98076923077 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8187567377 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599358974359 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5208953037 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.125 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8125 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269548726834 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775532291776 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933859546983 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163603602844 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098702713755 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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