The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie charts shows how electricity is used in an average English home.

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The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie charts shows how electricity is used in an average English home.

The charts give information about electricity utilization in different seasons for different purposes in England.

The graph shows daily electricity consumption in winter and summer. It is easily seen that daily demand in winter is nearly two times higher than typical summer day. Energy consumption has a wide fluctuation around 35,000 unit until 15:00 and after it reach the pick at around 50,000 unit at 22:00 in winter. However,in summer,there is a moderately decreasing until 9:00 ,then it increase dramatically and reaches the high at 20,000 unit at 14:00. Following this with some ups and downs it stays just under 20,000 until end of the day.

In pie chart we can easily observe more than half of total demand is for heating rooms and water. Remaining energy is consumed by ovens,TV,vacuum cleaner and other gadgets.

To sum up, the most of electrical energy used for heating rooms and water in the winter.

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Sentence: Energy consumption has a wide fluctuation around 35,000 unit until 15:00 and after it reach the pick at around 50,000 unit at 22:00 in winter.
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