The graph shows the demand for electricty in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie charts shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
The given line chart depicts the information about the electricity, whichbis demand by England's individuals during winter and summer, while the circular chart illustrates how electricity ia consumed in an average british home.
It can be seen that the consumption of electricity in winter is about 33,000 units at midnight but, it reaches at aroud 30,000 units at 7 am before inclining to approximately 40,000 at 3 am. In addition, the electric energy is consumed in cold season starts increasing slightly and reaches at the peak point (45,000 units) at 9 pm. In the summer season, demand of electricity is about 18,000 units at 12 am. Moreover, it incline to the highest point at 2 pm then, it decline to 18,000 units.
As far as trend is concerned, the maximun electricity (52.5%) is used for heating rooms and water whereas, only 30% of electricity is consumed for either lighting, TV, radio or vacuum cleaner, food mixer, electric tools.
Overall, it is evident that the demad for electricity is more in winter than summerband the most of the electric energy is consumed for heating rooms and water.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...the peak point 45,000 units at 9 pm. In the summer season, demand of electricity is about 18,000 ...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'inclines'?
Suggestion: inclines
...out 18,000 units at 12 am. Moreover, it incline to the highest point at 2 pm then, it d...
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Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'declines'?
Suggestion: declines
...e to the highest point at 2 pm then, it decline to 18,000 units. As far as trend is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, then, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9623655914 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76601800252 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2258564966 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.857142857 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20272814586 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104910639844 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990047222822 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155458484192 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981726849437 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.