Some people say that computer games are bad for children by all means other believe that these games are contributed to children development.the discuss both view and give your apinion
With the rise in modernization a man has transfored his life tremendously: he has progressed from walking bare footed in the jungle to take the first step in the moon. Nevertheless these are some issues, which remained irrevocable and as complex as ever. For intance the given topic asserts that; they are engrossed in playing video games should screnn are helpful for children development or not? Through this essay, i shall explore the dimension of this topic example and assertiom and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side there is a group of people who believe that the playing vidoe games are beneficial for children. They strengther their view point by claim that the playing video games are improve to hand movement and eye quardination. children can learn many visual attention skills and they give qiuck response of any question. Moreover they sharpes the memory with the help of playing games and they learn the lesson of multi tasking.
Contrary to this, there is a group of people who believe that the playing video games are bad effect for children. To make their argument convincing they claim that the children when they play violent video games are one of the most bad effect of their eye, their eye sight have weak. The best opitome of this is the survey of 2010, which is conducted by british medical team, they claim that 62% of children became weak eye sight due to playing indoor games such as video games
Nevertheless, there are some issues i believe that there is no single conclusion, it is important for the development of the children witn in the limits so that it may no effect their other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Nevertheless,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75704225352 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42775753433 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.4469950232 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.818181818 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260879294804 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113378056012 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087196715001 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16115004157 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373316445253 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.