A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
Most of the developed landmarks in this prestigious planet highly depend on the travelers as they act as the major source to provide financial aid for the specific region they visit to. However, if not bound by the rules it can also be the leading issue to undermine culture by commercialization which often creates vandalism in various sectors. This essay firstly explains the merits of tourism in boosting economic sector, likewise, secondly it provides detail on demerits of their involvement in the contemporary world and at last it will reach towards the relevant conclusion.
Tourist are the one who play the most significant role to expand and share knowledge and experience which in return assists the whole world to learn about the area with such variety. It will be the major source which will influence the individual to travel in area consisting the remarkable features. Moreover, the tourism sector acts as a major cause to increase income of the country directly or indirectly from expenses they make while travelling, entertaining, staying, researching or even serving with mega projects. For instance, Recent data from World Tourism Organization revealed that the popular nation like France with remarkable tourist destination can earn up to more than 70 % of revenue from national and international tourism. Thus, tourism is the primary reason for their development.
With rapid increase in tourism there of course will be chaos when it comes to culture and tradition of the nation. Different tradition and cultural priority can dismantle different sector of the nation. If the culture followed by international tradition are prioritized more in a nation then it does loose the cultural importance which in a long run can impact the tourism sector. This in return will cause clash among variety of cultures throughout the nation. However, if certain rules are implied and implemented then with proper morale these can be the problem of the past.
In conclusion, tourism is the crucial sector to develop the financial aspect of the country which contributes more in development of the nation welfare; however, it does possess a threat that can be solved easily with proper rules being forecasted and implemented in the tourist affected region.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 965.302439024 197% => OK
No of words: 364.0 196.424390244 185% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23351648352 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 3.73543355544 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80360488734 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 106.607317073 187% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546703296703 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 283.868780488 209% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7899021468 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.071428571 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 5.23603664747 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219091130643 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777053803291 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411381667679 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137999361739 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239536579567 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 40.7170731707 275% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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