Some people believe that the advent of economical air travel has been very beneficial by making international travel more accessible , while others argue that it has had a very negative impact. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
These days, some people believe that with development of economical air travel, a growing number of international travel are now expanding in many countries in the world. However, others hold the view that there are some drawbacks. In this essay, I will examine both ideas in detail and then give my opinion.
On the one hand, there is a common belief that the arrival of aerail transportation can be considerably benefical. Obviously, with low-cost flights, people have more opportunities to travel abroad easily. For example, they are likely to afford pay a visit to other countries on holiday or students find more comfortable to come back their home if they attend at a school abroad instead of being afraid of cost travel. Besides, from economic perspective, international air travel has sucessfully shortened the long distance places. In other words, more and more businessman tend to attend meetings aboard and also expand international partnership which contribute to growth economy.
However, some argue that international air travel often causes some negative impacts. One of the biggest problem of the development of aviation industry is that aeroplanes use a huge of fuel, a non-renewable resource which make carbon dioxide and a main factor to climate change and global warming.
In conclusion, although a growing number of people feel that they are suffered negative effects from air travel advances, I believe there are more beneficial to foster economic integration and process of globalization of each country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35123966942 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94647803405 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623966942149 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.871761461 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.727272727 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343503677117 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122963311552 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820029468421 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202727207158 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060356295436 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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