Now-a-days, technology is getting advanced day by day. Everything these days, has gone online from ordering pizza to medicines. Modernisation has changed the technique of marketing. Earlier every body use to go to the shop for shopping, its available now at your doorstep. Some are against it while some are fore it. is a matter of discussion among all.
Firstly, Digital marketing has changed the structure of the old market, as all things are available online. In old days people think before purchasing things online like clothes, shoes etc as change in size etc make them uncomfortable to wear. Offering lot of discounts on online shopping has made pupil to shop more and more as its available in best rate than the shops .
Secondly, it's convenient for people to sit home and get things home delivered. For example Big Basket, it delivers fresh fruits, groceries and vegetables online. Ordering it on there app and getting every day in the morning at cheapest price rather waiting for the vegetable vendor to come.
On the other hand, online shopping has made life difficult for normal shopkeeper and vendors. It has reduced market footfall as no body is interested to visit the market. New brands have started coming these days which deal online like Reliance fresh etc which have reduced the sale of shop owners resulting in closing of shops.
In my opinion, I think both things are necessary these days. Every person in the world has its own choice, not all go for online shopping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...hnique of marketing. Earlier every body use to go to the shop for shopping, its ava...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ng has made pupil to shop more and more as its available in best rate than the sho...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
... to shop more and more as its available in best rate than the shops . Secondly, its ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ts available in best rate than the shops . Secondly, its convenient for people ...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93280632411 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51946357294 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4911029863 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4117647059 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8823529412 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119814211087 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353986299846 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383161475944 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655470444685 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02143219532 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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