You are not satisfied with the changing room in a sports center that you visit.
Write a letter to the manager
What the problem is
How you feel about the problem
What steps you want the manager to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the changing room in your sport center. Yesterday, was my first day at your fitness center, I was undoubtedly very excited to start my exercises there. However, when I headed the changing room in order to put on my trainings suits, I really shocked on capacity of the room as well as some lockers were not matched the number of players.
I wholeheartedly was frustrated to see such bad set up as I thought that the changing room will accommodate all club's member needs, but, unfortunately it doesn't. In fact, this makes a lot of difficulties on me and even all people as there is no places at changing room to keep our belongs which forced us to keep them with us and make the center messy because of that.
Therefore, I would like to suggest some solutions to mitigate such issue. Firstly, it would be perfect to enlarge the changing room. Secondly, insert different size of cabinets to address all people needs.
Finally, I hope you will address these concerns as soon as possible.
Best regards
Bilal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express my d...
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...were not matched the number of players. I wholeheartedly was frustrated to see s...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...ubs member needs, but, unfortunately it doesnt. In fact, this makes a lot of difficult...
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...fficulties on me and even all people as there is no places at changing room to keep our belongs wh...
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... make the center messy because of that. Therefore, I would like to suggest some ...
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...room. Secondly, insert different size of cabinets to address all people needs. ...
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... cabinets to address all people needs. Finally, I hope you will address these c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ess these concerns as soon as possible. Best regards Bilal
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... soon as possible. Best regards Bilal
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...ssible. Best regards Bilal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81052631579 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72458795075 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663157894737 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6710684565 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 4.34317383033 251% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156440003133 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530432184661 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507584964298 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086792528779 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03780106765 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.