People mainly type on keyboards nowadays rather than write things down by hand. As a result, handwritng skills are getting worse. Do you agree or disagree with this statement. What are the benefits of writing by hand.
90% member of society adopted messages as their main communication type. this essay maintain a dissent to the prevalence of computer typing as it results in impacts and repercussions, mitigate eyes’ sight and measly social skills. In contrast, having note and handwriting letters comes up with a vast number of benefits, to wit; accelerate human memories.
The principle given is firmly harsh and unprecedented by vital of harm to people’">people’s eyes. A recent study illustrates if a child glides the internet more than 3 hours a day, she will cause serious myopia. this borne by the fact that eye-neurons which transfer information to brains are mitigated when people concentrate on one point for too long. In this occasion, the figure is relocated to computer. Another logical justification is the short-sight between the computer screens and people’">people’s eyes.
Apart from the practical issue expressed above, it is also concurred with the truth that the inadequacy is a real and imminent menace for its consequence. Chatting and writing note online diminish people social skill of interaction as proven by the fact which include multitude of people who are extremely close on internet. They can not have a discussion and firm eye-contact to each other when having the first performance. The rationale for this mess is message can hide member of society emotions, with regard to this, people can have free time to send a message.
A careful scrutiny of the subject invariably reveals that handwriting is possessed with unmistakable merits and primary of which is the sharp developments and expansions in people’">people’s memory. Experiments in psychology has observed the benefit of gaining knowledge in the process of writing teachers’ and lecturers’ lessons down. 76% interviewers in Bach Khoa University share the same sentiments with this idea.
Subsequently, weighing all the aforementions, it can be clearly stated that the writer is in conflicted with the trend of using computer as the main type of communication for variant reasons and data.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-11-20 | khushisharma | 78 | view |
- the line graph illustrates changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. 78
- the bar chart illustrates the average annual pay for doctors and other workers in 2004 in some countries 61
- People mainly type on keyboards nowadays rather than write things down by hand. As a result, handwritng skills are getting worse. Do you agree or disagree with this statement. What are the benefits of writing by hand. 89
- The chart shows the percentage of deaths from heart disease and cancer, and calories consumed from unrefined planted foods.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 89
- the pie illustrates the percentage of level of education of women in someland in 1945. write at least 150 words 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...sages as their main communication type. this essay maintain a dissent to the prevale...
^^^^
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'maintains'.
Suggestion: maintains
...eir main communication type. this essay maintain a dissent to the prevalence of computer...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., to wit; accelerate human memories. The principle given is firmly harsh and ...
^^^
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...s a day, she will cause serious myopia. this borne by the fact that eye-neurons whic...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e''>people's eyes. Apart from the practical issue expressed...
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an have free time to send a message. A careful scrutiny of the subject invari...
^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the same sentiments with this idea. Subsequently, weighing all the aforement...
^^^
Line 9, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...unication for variant reasons and data.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, apart from, in contrast, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55963302752 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.086132749 2.80592935109 146% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626911314985 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5032627424 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.625 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16218626016 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528517070064 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285709126134 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885994630246 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182219180186 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.