The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent you agree or disagree?
In the current scenario,the world has been suffered from many disturbing issues,however an ever-increasing crime rate which are committed by youth needs to be controlled on priority. Although it is argued that the best appropriate approach to resolve this issue is to educate youngster's parents on the breeding skills.I believe that in addition to this aspect,the bureaucrat also plays an crucial role to tackle this menace in proper way.
To begin with,today's young generation observe and inculcate the way their parents live their lives.To be more precise,it plays pivotal role in terms of how do they behave with their child?, how do they teach their child about morals and values of life? Moreover,parents could restrict company of their child to the friends to make them aware about certain anti-social activities and keep them away from it.Neverthless,this is not only solution and may not reduce the rate of crimes which are committed by youngsters up to the mark.
Admittedly,the conscious efforts by both government and parent play role which is more indispensable.The enforcement of stern laws and strict legislation would not only punish culprits but also sensitize other young offenders. Furthermore, indeed this key measure would curb incidences of petty crimes,organised offenses,severe felonies and many more. For example,the introduction and execution of rule number 370 by the government of India in 2017,for the people particularly youth who committed fraud,robbery,smuggling,has decreased the number of crimes in the country.
In conclusion,while the burgeoning of crime rate by adult is burning issue in front of the globe,which needs to be tackled for better future generation.The development of upbringing skills of parents is necessary,undoubtedly this is not only and best way. I believe that the government plays an incredible role along with parent to reduce rate of crimes by youngsters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52881355932 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.62086582848 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572881355932 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6191521931 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.222222222 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7777777778 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24107559479 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942276710826 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634053252479 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145923093387 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562624541499 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.