Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
With the advantages of technology human has shifted to a lifestyle in which individual requirement for delicious food has emerged not just to satisfy hunger. They want to enjoy diverse range of food with varying taste and for that they have invented many new and complex recipes. In this essay we will discuss the the pros and cons of advancement in food preparation methods.
There has been a significant change in the food cooking technique due to the increasing demands of customer. They want to be served quickly and swiftly. To overcome this challenge, food industry has introduced many equipment like the rice cooker, oven, slicer, mixer and so on to make the cooking process quick and convenient. Now the restaurant and outlet can serve food with varieties within a short time by using latest equipment and it has decreased the physical intervention. it is also helpful to save the people from doing tedious work.
Moreover, change in cooking method has made a tremendous difference in the household women life and now they can devote their spare time for recreational activities, which is helping them to improve their health.
On the downside, the implementation of new technology has lead to the growth of fast food outlets and they pop up everywhere like mushroom in the rain. This may seem helpful for the working class like, Students, professionals and researchers but the health hazards are even greater and majority of people is suffering from health related issues.
The obesity rate is skyrocketing in western countries as well as in India. A recent study has indicated that the people those who depend on the fast food are either suffering from heart related diseases or high sugar level.
In conclusion, it is undeniable fact that improvement in food sector has made a wonderful change in the day to day life of people from different walk of life, but the health related issues are also alarming and we must put limitation on the spread of fast food centers.
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun equipment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much equipment', 'a good deal of equipment'.
Suggestion: much equipment; a good deal of equipment
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96706586826 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69181658187 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562874251497 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.536860474 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18834683457 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604081257885 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388656260217 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938508162033 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311485853178 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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