Museums play important roles in today’s society. With regard to this, there is an often debated topic on what purpose museums should serve. While some believe that they should serve as amusement centers, others hold the view that their primary aim should be to educate. Both sides of the argument will be discussed in this essay before a conclusion is reached.
On the one hand, a growing number of people believe that museums should be strictly for entertainment because the government generates substantial revenue from them. They claim that people get attracted from all over the world just to watch ancient exhibitions and get good value for money. A prime example is Egypt. Her national museum which houses artifacts and ancient paintings attract tourists from different parts of the world. In the same vein, a recent report by Africa Union revealed that a significant twenty percent of their revenue is generated from this. In addition, this fund could be used to establish other amusement centers.
On the other hand, some argue that the best purpose of museums is to educate. This is because they say museums contain relics and kinds of literature on the historical background of a nation and that it is the ideal place to learn and appreciate their heritage. If every student from elementary to the tertiary level of education visited the museum, the knowledge imparted can birth fierce patriotism which is a very relevant attitude for national development. For instance, every Russian is taught to visit the museum from their early cognitive stage of development and this could explain the strong passion they have for their country. It is thus understandable why many people support this view
After examining both sides of the argument, it is true that museums are a good platform for entertainment. Nonetheless, I believe that their role in education is more impactful to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nonetheless, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, it is true, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11538461538 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64463283656 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580128205128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1244831398 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289072269527 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966522578668 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838827659853 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180139820171 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083571863402 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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