Essay topics: You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have a friend who lives there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
1) Explain your situation
2) Say why you feel unsure about living in the city
3) Ask some question about life in the city
Dear Haider,
How are you? It's been long since I saw you last time. Would you be surprised if I tell you that I'll be moving to your city, new york next month?
As suprising as it may sound, I'm thinking to move to the city I have never been before due to the dream job I've secured in APC Bank. The interview was a month before and I got the golden email confirming my appointment yesterday morning. I was so excited untill I read the part written new york as the brunch for my posting during the provisional period.
The key reasons I feel hesitant about relocating is the chaotic and congested city life of that neighbourhood. you may know that I grew up in a countryside and always felt comfortable to in a laid back lifestyle. so, even the idea of living in a cosmopolitan city like NY scares me off!
if I decide to take the job, I don't want to get adjusted in the city all by myself. so, you are the hope I have to make me familiar in the area. can you suggest me regarding the residential area near South Manhattan? Also, what are the things one can do in the city during the weekend?
Hope to hear from you soon!
take care,
Shahla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...onth? As suprising as it may sound, Im thinking to move to the city I have nev...
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... never been before due to the dream job Ive secured in APC Bank. The interview was ...
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... posting during the provisional period. The key reasons I feel hesitant about re...
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...omfortable to in a laid back lifestyle. so, even the idea of living in a cosmopoli...
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...osmopolitan city like NY scares me off! if I decide to take the job, I dont want...
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...olitan city like NY scares me off! if I decide to take the job, I dont want t...
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...at are the things one can do in the city during the weekend? Hope to hear from...
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...end? Hope to hear from you soon! take care, Shahla
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...pe to hear from you soon! take care, Shahla
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, regarding, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26363636364 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43585476368 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1356062888 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1538461538 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319469453401 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104169823645 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733086497039 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165843415105 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822352572348 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.