Some people prefer to listen to music while studying, as music has a calming effect on the mind. Others prefer a pin drop silence in order to concentrate on the content they are studying and have an undivided attention while they do so.Which option works

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Some people prefer to listen to music while studying, as music has a calming effect on the mind. Others prefer a pin drop silence in order to concentrate on the content they are studying and have an undivided attention while they do so.
Which option works better for you and why do you think the other option is not viable to ensure a successful study time?

While some people believe that listening to music while studying is one of the best tools to ingrain all the material in your mind, others think that silence works better. They discussed that an environment surrounded by silence is the best option to memorize the syllabus. In my opinion, silence is the best option to choose when studying.
First of all, a student being in a peaceful environment has the best chance to succeed. It is said that people who have been studying in a calm place are likely to obtain better results than compared with those who have not been under such conditions. When studying, our brain needs to focus on the subject without having any disturbances around. That is the reason why some students, who have some deficits in attention, receive better marks compared with those who do not have any problems when having nocturnal studies.
Moreover, even calm musics affect our mind negatively. Our brain has two parts which process the received information. The right part, that is responsible to calculate the information, and the left, that assimilates it. Therefore, it is quite impossible to absorb the information when we are trying to study and listen to music, due to the fact that our brain only processes one piece of information at a time.
Finally, always studying under silent conditions outdoes studying listening to music because we ought to have a fresh mind when doing the activity.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, moreover, so, therefore, while, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 5.94088669951 303% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9625 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58988081558 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6198425804 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293105263693 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977797003409 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813425572408 0.071462118173 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174405107875 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904183700887 0.0609392437508 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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