Some people think that teen years are the happiest time of most people’s lives, others think that adult life brings more happiness, In spite of greater responsibility.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that the majority of people enjoy adolescent years the most in their lives, while others say that despite being more responsibilities, mature life has more happiness. This essay will argue that although mature life has more events to celebrate, I believe that teenage life is stress-free.
Some would argue that in grown-up year quality time with family is more enjoyable than anything else. In other words, in close-knit families, each member shares their problems and worries with each other and they tried to solve it collectively. Hence they have very few things to worry so they enjoy each and every moment of their life. For example, the happiness a father gets while playing with their children is unimaginable. However, I believe that life has so many ups and downs one has to go through these and parenting is not an easy task, the pain a father gets when his child is going through any trauma is unexplainable.
On the other hand, the teen years are the exploration phase of one’s life with no stress and worries. They observe and learn things with their own perspective and enjoy each and every moment of life, getting the full essence of it. Youngster hangs out with their friend carrying their dreams and ambitions without having any accepting any responsibility. For example, a survey report published in the Daily times states that only 10% of the young adults have things to worry such as broken relationships. I believe that a teenager wants to take his dreams to the next level with the pressure of anything with great enthusiasm.
To conclude, although adult life has a lot of things that give the feeling of contentment, while I believe that during teenage, a person gets most of the happiness of his life because at this stage of life one has nothing to worry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ieve that teenage life is stress-free. Some would argue that in grown-up year q...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...nd they tried to solve it collectively. Hence they have very few things to worry so t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, thus, while, as to, for example, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85483870968 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58544110805 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2816849801 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170367642875 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650559915045 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679900480814 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117345472125 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541999422274 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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