Exercise is important for our health, but are there things that are more important?

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Exercise is important for our health, but are there things that are more important?

In the world today, nothing is more important than health. Even though you have a lot of money, but without having a good health, you can't do anything to worth that money you have earned.
So what should we do to keep living healthy? Some may say exercise is the most important way and others say eating habit is more important. For me both are important but you may forget one key factor which is time management and in humans, we call it the biological clock.
All activities must be done at the right time. Support your biological clock by going to bed and getting up at the same time every day, including weekends. Also for exercise, you must have a fixed schedule to make the body get used to it which is the best way to have better results for your health. For example, one man keeps doing exercises every day at the same time but the other one only does exercises twice a week at the different time. Apparently, the first man who keeps his biological clock works properly would receive a better health.
Finally, time management is the most important thing to have a fixed schedule which affects directly on your body activities. So today, create yourself a timetable matching your activities for keeping healthy everyday.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
..., but without having a good health, you cant do anything to worth that money you hav...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ame time every day, including weekends. Also for exercise, you must have a fixed sch...
^^^^
Line 3, column 548, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...properly would receive a better health. Finally, time management is the most imp...
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Line 4, column 210, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ing your activities for keeping healthy everyday.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, finally, first, if, may, so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6301369863 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38568634636 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593607305936 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2737144179 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253753360374 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949521614157 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940623798845 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153499073589 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371521715785 0.056905535591 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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