Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that having very hard avocations might offer unique moments on it and make it the most enjoyable and interesting one. I wholeheartedly disagree with that as I believe that enjoyable does not only rely on the kind of hobby, but many more factors are standing behind the entertaining. This essay aims to explore this topic in further detail and before coming to a conclusion.
To begin with, it's irrefutable that certain fads especially adventures which need too much effort and collaboration between various mates such as climbing, camping or even hunting might provide a special and memorable experience for lots of persons who love such these ventures. On the other hand, people generally has their own measurements criteria on what considered enjoyable or monotonous. For instance, there are many book readers who might spend most of their leisure times reading numerous novels and stories and find it more pleasant hobby than football. Thus, it totally depends on human mentalities and preferences.
In consequence, the enjoyment indeed has several factors. First of all, the surrounded situation is playing the pivotal role in acquiring the happiness of anything people doing. To illustrate, it's undoubtedly that individuals who have some financial limitations will never be satisfied as others who are financially independent. Since, they have no sufficient time nor emotional capabilities to exert such activities. Second of all, individuals basically, need a motivation by their families, friends or even employers to do their hobbies. For example, numbers of advance international companies in Saudi Arabia have recently started to encourage their workers to attend in local sports center in order to improve their healthcare by giving them special rewards and prizes. This definitely will facilitate their hobbies.
To sum up, there is no doubt that some difficult hobbies will be very interesting activities for some individuals. In contrast, it’s impossible to measure satisfaction of hobby by only the hardness of performing activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, in contrast, kind of, no doubt, such as, first of all, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48909657321 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96778967342 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651090342679 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6015087372 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.125 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157223670523 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429769919049 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536860153692 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979526835314 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533368703521 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.