Write a letter to your friend who recently moved to another country.
In your letter you should say why you are writing.
You should discuss when you want to see your friend.
You should discuss how you plan to meet your friend again.
Hi John,
I hope that you are doing very well in the new home. I just wanted to let you know that you really being missed, and I decided to visit you soon. I am planning to fly to Toronto in the next month, on May 1st, 2019, for business purposes. So, I really would like to see there.
My visit will be just for 10 days, thus I am wondering if you have an available time between the 2rd of May till the 10th of May to meet up. I prefer to meet in the evening any day. Since, I have a plethora of meetings and conferences to attends at the morning.
As far as I know, Toronto has several entertainment activities to do such like visit Niagara waterfalls, Downtown Square, and nightclubs. Therefore, I wish to do any of them during my stay there. It certainly will be a memorable visit.
I look forward to seeing you soon,
Thanks a lot,
Bilal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi John, I hope that you are doing very well in t...
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Line 4, column 239, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'attend'.
Suggestion: attend
...plethora of meetings and conferences to attends at the morning. As far as I know, T...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... I look forward to seeing you soon, Thanks a lot, Bilal
^^^^^
Line 10, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd to seeing you soon, Thanks a lot, Bilal
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, really, so, therefore, thus, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 694.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23170731707 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44204081767 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640243902439 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7444031999 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0909090909 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185594781405 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066006576506 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870918317783 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130683638955 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095895019112 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.