Hi Gargi,
Hope you are in best of spirits and have settled well in Hongkong City? After your move, I have been really missing our lovely evening sessions and your enchanting talks. Therefore, I decided to write to you to plan out my trip over your place. Since its been only a week that you have left, I sincerely wish that we could catchup in a month's time.
First and foremost, have you already managed to find an appropriate apartment for yourself? Based on my understanding, the units there are relatively smaller than the one's you had here in Singapore. Although both countries have a lot of similarities in terms of building space and the unit size, however the rentals are pretty much on a higher side. Nonetheless, the weather there is wonderful. Hence, am looking forward to visit you in the month of November so that I can enjoy winters with you. Also, if you could take leave for a day, it would be great to spend some quality time together and galavant around the city. Let me know your thoughts and plans for the upcoming month.
Lastly, do you know anyone there who could help you settle with the required accommodation, nearby supermarkets, Indian groceries and other necessities to ease you burden? If not, I can try to connect you with some of my office colleagues there. Do keep me posted of your well being. Wishing you all the luck and good health.
Warm wishes,
Nur Amirah
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...missing our lovely evening sessions and your enchanting talks. Therefore, I decided ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
... the weather there is wonderful. Hence, am looking forward to visit you in the mon...
^^
Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to visiting'.
Suggestion: to visiting
...is wonderful. Hence, am looking forward to visit you in the month of November so that I ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, lastly, look, nonetheless, really, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49529160982 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4908513931 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.625 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5625 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355803033778 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108420668996 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711903554457 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257007249619 0.12726935374 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295405927274 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...missing our lovely evening sessions and your enchanting talks. Therefore, I decided ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
... the weather there is wonderful. Hence, am looking forward to visit you in the mon...
^^
Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to visiting'.
Suggestion: to visiting
...is wonderful. Hence, am looking forward to visit you in the month of November so that I ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, lastly, look, nonetheless, really, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49529160982 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4908513931 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.625 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5625 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355803033778 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108420668996 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711903554457 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257007249619 0.12726935374 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295405927274 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.