Dear Sir,
I am writing with deep regret to inform you that I would not be able to pursue this course at the moment. Last week, I received my selection letter from your prestigious institute, however, I am unable to enroll for this year's curriculum.
In the month of January, I had applied for Chartered Accountancy course and had furnished all the requisite documents for enrollment. Despite, my profound interest in this course, there was no news of my selection. Crestfallen, I had applied for various job opportunities and was fortunate enough to join an MNC last month. Because of a binding contract that I need to abide, I have to delay my studies for one year. Furthermore, this is once in a lifetime opportunity which will provide me with a great head start in my career.
Due to the above reasons, I will not be joining the accountancy course at this point in time. Nonetheless, once I have completed my contract with the company, I shall reapply for this course as soon as possible. Please accept my sincere apologies for any inconvenience caused.
Looking forward for your prompt response.
Yours sincerely,
Nur Amirah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...however, I am unable to enroll for this years curriculum. In the month of January,...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nse. Yours sincerely, Nur Amirah
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94329896907 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86028600853 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6737874892 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9166666667 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247548612422 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841629916018 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483994005718 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142578354399 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038948949233 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.