Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous & unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree? discuss both options & give examples.
The discussion on keeping pets good for children or dangerous is a debatable topic and people around the globe are divided in their opinions. The subject attracts majority of views from people and remains a hot topic among people of concerns. In this essay I will scrutinize my point of view by providing some relevant example and explanation before drawing any conclusion.
To begin with, there are myriad of arguments in the side of my instances. The most preponderant one lies stems from the fact children can play with pets in leisure time like dog, cat and so on. Moreover, another pivotal aspect of this trend is that some intelligent pets like dog can look after our home when we are out of station. The most impeccable example I can quote here is that in the United States there natives keep dog in their home for play and protection.
On the flip side, there are some arguments of people, but the most crucial is that some people keep pets like pet bull dog, tigers and lion which are more dangerous. Furthermore, sometimes I heard some is that a pet bull dog kill child. As an illustration, a survey shows that in the India there are 20% killed pet due to the pet bull dog.
To conclude, after taking the above stated points into consideration, I am inclined to believe that keeping pets have some advantages as well as some disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, look, moreover, so, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67083333333 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57306764064 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7877296584 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.909090909 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188455876736 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757569133011 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656434874806 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115187460245 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399048241087 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.5310837438 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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