In the past 100 years, there are many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers.
What do you think is the most important invention for the past 100 years? Why?
In the last century, we have seen many developments and innovation over the world such as the invention of antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. In my opinion, the computer is one of the strongest and most effective inventions among other developments. In this essay, I will discuss how the computer has influenced many people and helped us in improving the education system, automation, and medical services.
To begin with, computers have improved the education system all over the world in many different ways, which includes studying on the computer rather than reading books. Even though it has some negative effects on school children such as impacting eyesight, computers have many benefits for school children such as attending classes from home.
Other points where computers have played a vital role in automating many manual processes in the manufacturing industry. People used to do many tasks using their hands, but the computer performs the task for them. In many factories, for instance, many manual processes completed by computers by a simple click.
Another point which could be made for computers is, it has improved medical sciences using computers. Many different kinds of computer applications have been developed to cure spreadable diseases. For example, computers have created many technologies such as x-ray, ultrasound, and other medical instruments.
To sum up, computers have played an important role in the development of many technologies in the medical sector, education system, and manufacturing industry. Computers could be very useful in the coming future as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88975368825 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.931034482759 537% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.807495405 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.923076923 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142749952931 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630049033229 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450449867348 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903467810055 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408933157534 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.