Scientists predict in the near future cars will be driven by computer not people. Why? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is true that these days, some people predict that it will not take long before computer will driving cars. Even though there are still some disputes over this movement, I believe that the consequences will be wholly positive
There are some solid reasons to believe that computer-driven cars will soon become prevalent. This is attributed to the significant reason that on the basis of the drastic development of technology recently, human beings have achieved such remarkable breakthroughs along with exceptional inventions in terms of automatised devices. Thanks to these phenomenal foundations, scientists are therefore able to give birth to computerised vehicles namely self-driving cars, automatically-operating helicopters…Ultimately, by using satellites with sophisticated software, people are capable of navigating roads to their destinations. Thus, this helps people avoid hour traffic jams and ease traffic flow simultaneously.
Regarding benefits, cars driven by robots bring people with numerous merits. Initally, road safety is greatly improved as the complex software installed enables vehicles to detect and avoid human errors and reckless behaviors such as taking the wheel while getting drunk or unconciously falling asleep…, which literally diminishes the number of car accidents annually. If the control of vehicle was to be computerised, less people would get involved in car accidents. Additionally, this advance allows more people to use their private cars. As a matter of fact, in many countries, citizens have to undergo intensive training coursed as well as to sit rigorous exams in order to be entitled a driving license. Age limitation, health conditions,… may act as a deterrent when people use their cars. Therefore, all those obstacles will be tackled by the advance in leading-edge technology
It is undoutedly true that technological achievements will result in fully-computerised cars in the near future and this should be universall welcomed as a positive change
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'drive'
Suggestion: drive
...will not take long before computer will driving cars. Even though there are still some ...
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Line 2, column 504, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ultimately
...rs, automatically-operating helicopters…Ultimately, by using satellites with sophisticated...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...trol of vehicle was to be computerised, less people would get involved in car accide...
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Line 3, column 743, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...cense. Age limitation, health conditions,… may act as a deterrent when people use ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47065635803 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653333333333 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.8562100785 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.75 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207415015415 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679110566362 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068606404986 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144217372076 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480181303121 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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