Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
This is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work only five days a week for shorter hours
Indisputablly, today, people care about themself and their enjoyable activites more then the past. A controvesial question which is often raised regarding this issue is about hours' and deys' work. Some people believe it is more enjoyable to work only three days a week for longer hours insted of working with less hours in a day but more days in a week. I strongly believe it is better that I have a job where I work five days a week for shorter hours for some reasons that are elucidated blow.
Firs, by this means, prople will take a part-time job. In other words, people can work in another company to earn more money for solve their problems. I think my own expreince is a compelling example of what I mean. When I was 25, I have a financial's problems. I had to work more than the other people. Because I have job where I work five dayes a week with shorter hours, I could take another job as a part-time job and I overcame on my problem. Hence, I could mannage my financial's problems with participate in a job with shorter hours work in a day.
Another reason is that from a psychological standpoint. When people work on one thing for long hours, they loss their logical ability. In this sitution person could not choose the best option and he or she have a less efficent. I recently read a report in a well-known newspaper which is pointed out that a new research in Asia shows that the countries who have role that employees must work more hours per day have a less health's people. This clarifies the fact that a job with more hours do not have a good effect, on the other hand, it has bad effect.
To put it in a nutshell, some people think that having a job where they work five days a week for shorter hours is less enjoyable than to have a job where they work only three days a week with long hours. I think that it is more enjoyable and efficint to have a job with five days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...self and their enjoyable activites more then the past. A controvesial question which...
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Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
...for longer hours insted of working with less hours in a day but more days in a week. I str...
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Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...for longer hours insted of working with less hours in a day but more days in a week....
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n more money for solve their problems. I think my own expreince is a compelling e...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...e than the other people. Because I have job where I work five dayes a week with sho...
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Line 6, column 207, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ot choose the best option and he or she have a less efficent. I recently read a repo...
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Line 6, column 306, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'new research'.
Suggestion: new research
...own newspaper which is pointed out that a new research in Asia shows that the countries who ha...
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Line 6, column 419, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun healths is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ees must work more hours per day have a less healths people. This clarifies the fact...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, regarding, so, then, well, i mean, i think, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31652661064 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38314942298 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445378151261 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6790002129 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6111111111 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.565956513262 0.236089414692 240% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179561025396 0.076458572812 235% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159460458845 0.0737576698707 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.407688183743 0.150856017488 270% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124755796987 0.0645574589148 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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