You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news.
Write to your friend. In the letter:
• Describe the house.
• Describe the neighbourhood.
• Invite your friend to come and see the house.
Dear Hoa,
How are you? It has been a rather long time since our meeting on the occasion of your birthday last month. Today I am so happy to tell you that I have just moved to a new house in Binh Thanh District, Ho Chi Minh City.
Well, let me tell you about it. The house consists of six rooms painted with various colors, including three bedrooms with inside toilets, a living room, a dining room and a kitchen. In addition, there is a large playground in front of the house, where my children can play whenever they want. Especially, I like the beautiful garden the most because we can sit there for relax after a tiring working day.
I love my new habitat not only for its comfortable facilities but also for the friendliness of neighbours. They are so kind that they helped me arrange everything before I moved here. For instance, they advised the most suitable school for my children.
I would be very glad if you can come and see my house this weekend. We will together prepare our favourite food and drinks as we did when we were students at the university.
Hope to see you soon.
Cheer!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50246305419 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38792817637 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709359605911 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5592628369 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3076923077 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147961266641 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535231625598 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460341771605 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842269291847 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516217758832 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.