You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:• Introduce yourself.• Explain that you did not buy

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You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.
Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:
• Introduce yourself.
• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.
• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Mary Hudson (Identity Card Number: 4783694), who have been using Visa credit card issued by your bank for five years. I am writing to inform you that there is a mistake in the credit card statement which was attached with your email to me on 20 June 2019.

Specifically, the statement indicated that I bought a dress from Sunshine Shop on 2 June 2019 with price of US$99.00, which was paid by this credit card. However, in reality, I did not buy any dress using the credit card. I would be very grateful if the statement could be checked and the result should be available before the deadline for credit card balance payment (10 July 2019).

In case I do not receive your reply before the deadline, I will pay for what I actually spent by the deadline, and shall not responsible for any interest automatically arisen from your mistake, if any.

I am looking forward to hearing from you at the soonest.

Yours truly,

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56976744186 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37528285299 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645348837209 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7702633004 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.285714286 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254806655387 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106498898685 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460544117471 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141061717684 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623202346778 0.0580467560999 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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