In today’s era, education and Health are the basic needs of everyone’s life. The development of a nation is highly dependent on how healthy and educated are the citizens of that nation. Some individuals opine that these elemental facilities should be provided by the Government in free, while others suggest that it is the responsibility of a person. Initially, I shall Sautinise both perspectives, and Then my own opinion will be illustrated.
To begin with, educational and health care services may be provided by the governments in free to their citizens. This approach will result in a Plethora of benefits for the dwellers of the Country; Firstly, considering the educational facilities if the Government provided free education to the children, everyone will have the opportunity to be educated, no matter they are from a poor or rich background. This will ensure guaranteed education for every child. Consequently, each pupil will get employment opportunities. Besides, they may concentrate on the class properly, because they will have no worries about funds and loans for their education. Moving to the Health Care System, some low-income families are not able to afford the expenses of chronic diseases like diabetes and heart problems. The free health care system may financially relax them. Owned by Government. The Government Can accumulate funds from the citizens in the form of tax. For example, almost all developed Countries have adopted this approach. They collect money for unpaid educational and Health Services through taxation.
On the other hand, Some individuals believe that education and Health should be the duty of the person himself. There are numerous reasons overcrowd the institutions and hospitals if they do not charge a single penny. It will downplay the quality-of Services. Apart from this, people will overuse the facilities and will create the problem for them who are emergency in case of medical issues. Although free education will employ citizens, it will also increase unemployment because the resources are limited on the globe.
To recapitulate, there are various pros and Cons of both free and paid services. I believe that the Government should Provide unpaid facilities to only those who are in need. Gondénment should make a System to register the economically weak people to provide them free education and health benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, well, while, apart from, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35278514589 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94429469257 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535809018568 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.419373729 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7391304348 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3913043478 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82608695652 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242482967191 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691717168997 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761555834175 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161763605723 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562512079166 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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