You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The line graph below provides information about the incomes of four restaurants in a city in 2010
Summarise the information, write at least 150 words.
The line graph given illustrates in term of revenues of four different restaurants, namely Delicacy, Evening paradise, Grand Fiesta, and Spicy Fortune in a city over the course of 12 months, in 2010.
In general, the income of Delicacy had an upward trend whereas there was an opposite pattern in the other restaurants.
In January, the income of Delicacy hit the highest point with 160,000 dollars while just only 100,000 dollars of earning from Evening Paradise. Meanwhile, less popular was 50,000 dollars of the income of Grand Fiesta which higher than this of Spicy Fortune by 20,000 dollars.
Over the year 2010, the figure for Delicacy saw a slight fluctuation in the revenue before dropping to 50,000 dollars in December. By contrast, the income of the other locations was nearly volatile before keeping going on to rise in the next 2 months, 140,000 dollars with Evening Paradise and 120,000 dollars with Spicy Fortune, respectively. Moreover, the December of Grand Fiesta witnessed an overcome the income of the other restaurants and peak at 190,000 dollars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, whereas, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5646418912 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591954022989 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2437575888 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.428571429 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0787204262111 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421646069885 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321425767732 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518910135888 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224469736238 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.