Education is more important for all people. Education is the systematic process, improving learning knowledge,skills and improve their understanding. Student of backward areas come in the universities faces many spectacle during admission and few people believe that universities should be easier study for students. I strongly agree with this statement and express views in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are plethora reason why poor students come from the rural areas to get the higher education. First and foremost, it is mostly due to quality of education because they do not get a good knowledge during senior secondary school efucation and do not have a proper facilities such as experienced teachers,electronic gadgets and many more. Secondly,some student face the difficulty of money so that,they belongs to poor family and do not paid the large amount of money. Lack of money, they do not get admission in the univerties and do not purchase the costly books. In addition, lack of knowledge of rural person is low because they do not able to the entrance test. Entrance test is the compulsory of all college and universities.
Furthermore, higher education institute provides the scholorship or subsidies to the students. The reason is that students who cannot afford the fees of colleges. Apart from that, measure the performance of the students through the entrance test. The selection of the students should not be based on region, it should be based of their performance in entrance test.
In conclusion, universities should gives a admission about the performance of students. Government provides the some funds to the poor students according to their performance.
- Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and excercise everyday will be healthier and happier .However many ealderly are suffering from lonelyness and lack of fitness. Discuss the cause and solution 56
- Student from rural areas find it difficult to access university education. Some people think that universities should make it especially easy for them to study at. To what extend do you agree or disagree. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , skills
...ic process, improving learning knowledge,skills and improve their understanding. Studen...
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Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun spectacle seems to be countable; consider using: 'many spectacles'.
Suggestion: many spectacles
...rd areas come in the universities faces many spectacle during admission and few people believe...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good knowledge'.
Suggestion: good knowledge
...ty of education because they do not get a good knowledge during senior secondary school efucatio...
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Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'facility'?
Suggestion: facility
...hool efucation and do not have a proper facilities such as experienced teachers,electronic...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , electronic
... facilities such as experienced teachers,electronic gadgets and many more. Secondly,some st...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , some
...ectronic gadgets and many more. Secondly,some student face the difficulty of money so...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...ent face the difficulty of money so that,they belongs to poor family and do not paid ...
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Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'belong'
Suggestion: belong
...ce the difficulty of money so that,they belongs to poor family and do not paid the larg...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
.... In conclusion, universities should gives a admission about the performance of st...
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Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n conclusion, universities should gives a admission about the performance of stud...
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Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...ce of students. Government provides the some funds to the poor students according to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, apart from, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36329588015 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09762508697 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543071161049 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7757869138 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212585772308 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063586722501 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608052980782 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127029309241 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368660812373 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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