Q you are looking for a part time job at a football club.Write letter to the manager of the football club.Introduce your selfWhat experience and special skills you haveTell him/her When you think you could start.

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Q you are looking for a part time job at a football club.
Write letter to the manager of the football club.
Introduce your self
What experience and special skills you have
Tell him/her When you think you could start.

Dear sir Paul,
I am writing this to get a part-time job at your football club if possible. I am 24 years old and i am studing master in physical education system at university of arts and science. Because of daytime classes I want to do part-time job in evening.

My major area of interest in sports is football. I had some experience of coaching for football in sports club center over past 3 years. I am able to create a very friendly environment for my trainees so, anybody could ask anything without any hesitation. I am also worked in summer holidays in football club at my country.

Now days I am preparing myself for exams so unable to join the football club until I finish my semester. From next month of September I would able to join your football club.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,
John Albert.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...club if possible. I am 24 years old and i am studing master in physical education...
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Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...stem at university of arts and science. Because of daytime classes I want to do part-ti...
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Line 4, column 257, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ld ask anything without any hesitation. I am also worked in summer holidays in fo...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...days in football club at my country. Now days I am preparing myself for exams...
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Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... next month of September I would able to join your football club. I am looking...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 705.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60784313725 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62949876302 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653594771242 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1174366764 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0909090909 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275106916956 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999268212852 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668075232418 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161106367035 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159447379933 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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