Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The issue claims that technology has complicated our lives more than it was supposed to simplify. I agree that there are some complications which were newly introduced by the advancement of technology, but I believe that it simplified our lives at a much higher rate.
Firstly, if we compare the lifestyle of the current generation with the previous generation, we can observe significant advancements in technology. For instance, if we consider the development in telecommunication, in the earlier days, for a person to communicate with someone outside the country, there is only one option and that is writing letters. Which then moved to telephones where the people are charged with a great amount for every minute of an international call. Whereas, in the current generation, one can communicate directly and can also video chat with the help of the internet at free of charge. Not only video chat but the recent hologram technology of Microsoft can also show a virtual 3-dimensional image of a person one wants to communicate with, and all this using just a few button clicks! Although a complication that the technology introduced here can be, asking a layman to use hi-fi technology. For example, all these "button clicks" which are to be done to make a call or a video chat might seem too complicated for someone with little to no knowledge of a mobile phone. But if one learns how to use it, it all seems very simple and obvious. This one small instance shows how technology has changed the world over time and simplified our lives which were once thought to be conundrums. Another great example is how the Internet has simplified our lives by providing great information about anything.
Also, comparing the impact of technology in engineering, medical and environmental sciences, one can easily identify how peoples lives are changed over time. Smallpox, Polio and many other diseases impacted hundreds of thousands of people all over the world. But with the advanced technology in medical sciences, they are now almost completely eradicated.
However, there are a few cases where this improvement in technology also created a few issues. For example, before the invention of cars and motorcycles, there was no huge issue of depleting natural resources. But now, every country is aware of the disaster that might occur if we do not reduce the usage of these natural resources. But again, with the help of technology, the world is moving towards electric vehicles thus reducing the problem of exploiting the earth.
To conclude, I strongly believe that technology has made the human's life much simpler. Although there are some problems which are newly created with the advancement of technology, these are again being solved with more advanced technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 62, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, thus, whereas, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2333.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12747252747 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92549350657 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498901098901 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 760.5 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4396734049 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.65 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168222828778 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533572230716 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505697821547 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986904028518 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647698190209 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.8971910112 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.