Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
it cannot deny that the computer is one of the most significant scientific inventions from ten decades before till now. While I agree that the computer is a marvelous invention, I believe that it still has some disadvantages.
The computer plays an important role in our lives. Thanks to the computer, people can communicate with each other whether they are in any part of the world by getting access to the internet. Talking to each other or even seeing their face is popular in modern society and all you have to do is a smartphone connected to wifi or 3G. Besides that, unless they have friend, they can take part in some forums, social clubs… online to make friends. it creates a wider environment for building new relationship. Adults also need to read news to get information about economy, politics or traffic… in the world. For students, the computer is an effective learning tool. they can collect information like books, pictures or videos… so as to make essays, presentations… Then go to email or Gmail to post files to groups or teachers to see. The computer is a huge information store, it greatly improves the speed and accuracy of stored documents. computers also contain a large amount of software for listening to music, playing games so that people can relax after a hard-working or studying day. Sellers use computers to plan business, manage their sales websites.
However, everything has two sides. Looking too much at the computer screen will make your eyesight get worse. Furthermore, sitting for a long time will make you have a backache, headache and cause many diseases such as neurasthenia depression, sleep disorders… More dangerous is radiation affects the reproductive system, causes cancer. Although computers are very useful for children to study, relax, they still can cause unpredictable harms. children can easily get access to dark webs or spend too much time playing video games, watching movies… Not only does it affect individuals, using laptop too much also make the interaction, emotions between people decrease and insensitivity increase.
In conclusion, in the last hundred years, it cannot deny that computer has an integral part of our lives. At the moment, this is a technology world so laptop is gradually becoming an indispensable companion for each person. In order to technology does not dominate the world and people don't depend on it too much, we need to use computers in a smart way.
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...n it too much, we need to use computers in a smart way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, then, while, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08374384236 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83788310692 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593596059113 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0862900852 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2857142857 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7619047619 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134513656844 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409870142485 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321491726868 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861310081285 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216040476493 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.