Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this? What solutions can be offered?
Childhood obesity is becoming a serious issue in many nations. This essay will look at some primary cause of this and offer some possible solutions to this problem.
There are a number of reason for the increasing number of childhood obesity. The first reason is unhealthy eating habits. This means that children nowadays tend to consume too much fast food, sugary drinks and candy. These foods might therefore cause kids to gain weight quickly as they are very high in fat and sugars but low in vitamins and minerals. Another reason is sedentary life. For example, children tend to watch TV, browse internet or play video games instead of playing outside or doing sport. As a result, they are becoming increasingly obese.
There are several actions that could be taken to mitigate the problem mentioned above. Firstly, it is really important for parents to control what children eat to make sure that they have a balance diet. For example, it would be better for children to eat more vegetables cooked at home by their parents rather than eat processed food from markets. Secondly, parents should educate children about the detrimental effects of balance diet so that they are more likely to make more food choices. Finally, It is necessary for parents to restrict the time their children spend on sedentary activities and encourage them to take more exercise. Physical activities and exercise would help them control weight by burning excess calories that otherwise would be store at fat.
In conclusion, there are various factors leading to the increase in child obesity, and measures should be implemented to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07037037037 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41795126919 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607407407407 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3789191089 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5625 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207326283515 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642582109901 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854498576331 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151619110614 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133856632718 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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