In some countries, employees are generally given two weeks of paid vacation time each year.
In other countries, employees are given four or six weeks of paid vacation time.
Considering the needs of both employee and employer,
what do you think is a reasonable amount of paid vacation time for employees to have?
In many countries, it has been argued for quite a long time that how many earned or paid leaves should be provided to workers by any organization. However, while I believe that employees should be entitled at least three weeks of leaves with salary annually, I also think that it should also be provided on the basis of their requirements such as medical emergency, family problems, and study-related leaves. In this essay, I will discuss further how the requirements of workers' and companies' should be fulfilled by provided equal number of paid vacation.
To begin with employees requirement, they cannot work continuously throughout the year, they need rest between working hours because they are humans not robots. Nowadays, it has become a mandatory law to provide casual leaves to all employees with pay whereas previously, they were not allowed to take any leaves, they were charged with salary deduction in case of any leave taken. Moreover, it has become mandatory to provide paid leaves to follow rules. In multinational companies, for instance, employees are entitles to take at least two weeks of paid leaves.
On the other hand, employer has some consequences of providing paid leave to employees such as extra financial burden, loss of working hours, and delay in product delivery. Although paid leaves provides many benefits to employees, at the same time, it is also impacting employer product delivery. So, they should be provided with two weeks of leaves. In many organizations, for example, they have to hire some extra resources to work in absence of other employees who are planning their paid leaves.
In my opinion, employees should be given at least three weeks of paid vacation because it could be beneficial for employer as well as for employee. Three weeks paid vacation could be reasonably sufficient time for workers to spend some leisure time with their family.
To sum up, number of paid leaves could be vary by different demographic regions, however it is important to provide at least three weeks of vacation with wages, so that work-life balance could be maintained among employees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, as for, at least, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12643678161 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71349587237 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488505747126 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8085722477 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.428571429 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7857142857 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24980716873 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105512516674 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562254174755 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153367075466 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618493750168 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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