you had just missed friends party.write a letter aplologising and stating reasons why you have not attend the party.ask how fun it was .
Dear Marry,
I am writing this letter to feel pity for my absence at your birthday celebration a couple of weeks ago.i was missing you a lot at that time and was feeling hopeless as after many tries i am unable to reach at your special occasion due to my knee fracture in the morning on the same day.
To begin with, as week before I have already started preparing for your birthday . Also, you will be astonishes to know that even i have thought to throw a party for you in a hotel. Moreover, i have practiced a lot for a hip hop style for you to do at the party and to make your friends impress with my talent . But all things have gone futile .
furthermore , As i was getting ready to go out for work . Indeed, i was in hassle to rush out of home I was left with few things pending to do for your birthday party too. I was so excited at that time . Unluckily , my foot slip from the wet floor and i was fall of on the floor . Besides this , I fall so badly that i got fractured in leg. simultaneously , I don't want to make you unhappy on your birthday so i called jimmy for my help. Doctor had told me to have a full bed rest . My goodness i was so much in pain that i even can't call you . I was feeling myself full of cursed as why this happened with me on your birthday.
At the end of the day , i have taken vacation off from my work also. Even , my boss was getting angry on me . because i was unable to go to office with this condition. Well , how's your special day has gone . Have you tried your favorite wine or not that i have sent you through jimmy. And what other things have you done in the party ? . Do write me also as i am waiting from your side enjoyable moments explanation.
At the moment i will get well . Soon I will show you my dance style.
your's lovingly ,
sarab
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.... Soon I will show you my dance style. yours lovingly , sarab
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...ow you my dance style. yours lovingly , sarab
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, moreover, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 32.9175257732 210% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 26.3917525773 197% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 937.175257732 152% => OK
No of words: 353.0 206.0 171% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.04249291785 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 3.78020617076 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20158063787 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504249291785 0.622605031667 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 290.88556701 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 12.6804123711 189% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7694505024 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.4583333333 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7083333333 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 53.0 2.54639175258 2081% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187663237021 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610553612844 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484291619515 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115038321417 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361370050268 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.56 8.71597938144 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.