Is it better for college students to live for away from home than live to at home with their parents?
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that living at home is timely food and health is very good can not only contribute to when we are at home with parents, they help One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge for college students to live in hostels or stay home with parents. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
their pupil in every situation but also lead to numerous other benefits in various field. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, these entire merits stand one is good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
There are however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of traveling again and again to the home for their parents are a time waste and loss to their studies. The primary one stems from the fact that by observing the aforementioned trend, people have not only realized its gravity, but also gauged the magnitude of its repercussions when it comes to today’s ever-changing lifestyles. Besides, its impact on college students is far reaching indeed. Hence, it is apparent why many are against is it better for college students to lie for away can widen their friend zone.
In conclusion, staying far from home can make them independent. Still I believe that living with parents can be beneficial as mentioned above as family can better nature them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Their
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...ar from home can make them independent. Still I believe that living with parents can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 306.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80392156863 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67333045382 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8917167033 50.4703680194 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35434051971 0.242375264174 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100916650468 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111300370266 0.071462118173 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195031707101 0.151781067708 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873131913363 0.0609392437508 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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