Some people think that government should provide education for free on all levels like primary, secondary and tertiary other believe that it is the responsibility of individual to pay for that on tertiary education.Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
Education is a necessary for the any development country and all people,few person thought that government should giving a free education for all levels for example primary,secondary and tertiary,where as a few believe in pay the person for the tertiary education.I agree with the latter notion.This essasy will look at both the outlooks in further paragraphs.
To begin with, There were immense benefits of free education offer by government it should be helpful for the poor people.the poor people can take chance to education and improve their skills.the countries will have also increase level of literacy.the people have educated than crime rates will be decrease.there will be more governments schools which provide education free as a result that the private school charges higher amount of fees,either decrease their fees and they may stop the schools.
According to the second view, if all the education is free then it might possible students will not value of educations.However,free education on all levels will put more burden on governments shoulder and this way government can not spend more on other important thing like health and defense which are equally important for the development of any country.on the other hand the government should provides a loan facilities for tertiary education who can not afford the fees and provide scholarships for tertiary education based on students intelligence level.
After analyse both views, it can br countable that all education gives free is not beneficial for government as well as students and because of free education will increase competition between the students for getting jobs in the future time.
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- Some people think that government should provide education for free on all levels like primary, secondary and tertiary other believe that it is the responsibility of individual to pay for that on tertiary education.Discuss both the view and give your opi 56
- Some people think that government should provide education for free on all levels like primary, secondary and tertiary other believe that it is the responsibility of individual to pay for that on tertiary education.Discuss both the view and give your opi 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, second, so, then, well, for example, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37262357414 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09290757847 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551330798479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.81942497 49.4020404114 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 353.25 106.682146367 331% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.75 20.7667163134 317% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.0 7.06120827912 439% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422305459464 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.269152854303 0.084324248473 319% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942928334698 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269152854303 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942928334698 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.7 13.0946893788 280% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.96 50.2224549098 -6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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