The two maps below show a island, before and after construction of some tourist facilities.
Looking at the two maps in sequence gives us a clear picture of the development of a island after the construction of some tourism facilities built.
Originally, the island was relatively undeveloped. There were none of tourism facilities, while there was only the beach at the west of island respectively.
However, after infrastructures were built, important developments brought Island towards its status as tourism destination. Beginning with construction of vehicle track across from north to south of island, which was connecting restaurant and reception into the harbor, the accommodation facilities grew at the east and west of island. Then, footpath facilities were built to guide tourist walk from their room into the reception. Furthermore, tourist could enjoy swimming at the beach walking around 30 meters through footpath, which connected from the west accommodation to the beach. In addition, the harbor with the distance of stage approximately 50 meters, could be stayed by ship.
Finally, the island transformed into well developed tourism island.
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while there was only the beach at the west of island respectively.
while there was only the beach at the west of island.
important developments brought Island
important developments were brought to the Island
around 30 meters through footpath, which connected from the west accommodation to the beach.
around 30 meters through footpath, which connects the west accommodation to the beach.
In addition, the harbor with the distance of stage approximately 50 meters, could be stayed by ship.
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